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Ashes
When you're alone
Unoccupied
Hiding behind a wall of solitude
Your emptiness devours you
You're getting  trapped in a vacant shell
starting to observe the incomplete riddles
of your insignificant life
The thirsty desires you haven't yet satisfied
The unfinished stories you've left behind
Strolling the roads of old memories
unforgattable faces
deformed faces
masked faces.....
faces
thier faces
his face
that one face
those eyes
that smile
the way his hand swayed waving goodbye
Till you find yourself sitting by the past's fireplace
depriving it from it's warmth
turning it to ashes
grains of dust
it's all gone...
and
Phoenix
Those curses they cast upon me
Pulling the roots
of my growing trees from their ground
Killing leaves
which still need their color to be found
Forcing birds
to abandon my sky which once had no bound
Breaking monuments
whch were once standing tall and proud
Burning my sacred temples
to ashes while they're asleep and sound

And as curses meant to be broken
My ruins will be rising
a Phoenix roaming the earth that's so round
Wine and NectarDrops of wine dripping
on petals of roses so red
slipping down the throat
of a dying bottle
sliding from it's lips
the sourness of wine
on the sweetness of nectar
merging gracefully
reviving lost colors
awakening neglected scents
the air thickens with warmth
as it holds their intoxicating breaths
the bottle let goes of it's last drop
wine and nectar
they thought
it forever lasts
and never ends

16.10.2012
I let you go
    It's been raining heavily. Moved by the view from the cab's window and the beautiful post-rock tracks I've been listening to, I found myself taking a pen and a dull notebook out and I wrote this down..

I let you go

As thunder announces the beginning of another end

as the sky releases it's sacred tears

clearing the misery of those dark heavy clouds

I let you go

Along with wine red lights

leaving their vivid reflection on transparent windows

painting a depressing piece of art

I let you go

As chants descending from pure sufi prayers

glorifying the lord

pledging their total devotion

I let you go

with much love and lost dreams

I
Time
A clock sitting on that wall
Weighing a ton of ticks
Extending three arms
Moving slowly
As if they're holding bricks
Numbers carved deeply
Like wrinkles on an old tree
Gathering in a circle
Waiting in vain
To be pointed on and set free
The wall horrified
By those strange eyes
long deep glances
fast sneaking looks
Praying and pleading
For eternal time to be mortified
An old man
With a hammer in hand
Swaying up
And down on a nail
Whenever a second slips
Till that hammer falls
Digging deep into the ground of his death

And the old woman beside him named time..
never dies

19.9.2012
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I walk

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Once walking in a foriegn town
distant from reality's frown
where nothing really matters
names and faces
dates and numbers
even time
nothing really matters
I walk..
Escorted by heavy drops of rain
along a cascade of dim warm street lights
reassuring and comforting
stripping lonlinesss of empty silent nights
and I walk..
as I begin to hear a sublime melody
descending from a place not very far
like im being called by somebody
my heart beats with anticipation
my steps lead me to my distination
I find myself facing a guy playing his guitar
making sounds so divine
playing the strings of my heart
each stroke on every string made me fall apart
then brought me together again
resurrected
then he stops as I hear him wondering ..What's your name ?
I find myself responding
names and faces
dates and numbers
nothing really matters
and I walk again..

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Mood: Love !lestever Dec 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Poetry really isnt my thing but I really enjoyed reading this and trying to picture it. Its wonderful. :) :+fav:
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~deekaydee Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really glad you like it :hug:
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!lestever Dec 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
My pleasure mate :)
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Mood: Wow! ~sadaciC Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great. I can really feel the rhythm in the structure and your phrases... The words made me smile despite the mood; it's quite powerful :)
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Mood: Love ~deekaydee Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
I'm really glad you've liked it :)
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~heavenslildevil6 Dec 6, 2011
love it.
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~deekaydee Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thx :)
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Mood: Amazed *SadeemKhalaf Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I ran out of words .. u r unbelievable <3
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Mood: Love ~deekaydee Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear :heart:
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*SadeemKhalaf Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome darling <3
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